You Ask, I Answer: How to Prevent AI Harming Student Writing?

In today's episode, Blaze asks, how can educators prevent generative AI from homogenizing students' independent reasoning and authentic voice in creative writing. This is a topic that has come up a lot. This is a topic that is there are new papers out recently that show that the use of AI diminishes students' reasoning abilities and creative abilities. And the answer is not to ban AI because that's not going to go well. No one has ever succeeded with banning technology for any amount of time.

Students are extremely clever. And there's a couple different ways of handling this. One, if you want people to write, if you want them to write, make sure that they enjoy writing. That helps a lot. If you have people who are not strong writers, help them become better writers.

Teach them how to express themselves through a vector they already understand. So if you have somebody who is very musical or gifted in speech, or is a dancer, or and it's very physical, if you are at all skilled in the in educational technique, you should be able to help bridge the gap between that student's understanding and their model of the world and the thing you're trying to teach them. You know, writing is like dancing ballet in these ways. We never just go on stage and wing it. We would have an idea, you have basics and moves.

Like this kind of move is like a plie. This kind of move is, I don't know, I don't know that much about ballet, so I can't offer good analogies here. I if I was a teacher, I would 100% be using AI to help me with those analogies for domains I don't understand to help create instructional materials for students that speak their language. This is not a new concept. This is a concept that Cicero said like 2,000 years ago.

If you want to reach somebody, speak to them in the language they understand. The second way is if you want to inspire creative outputs in your students, let them express themselves in the format that works best. Let's say you are doing a thing on the Battle of Gettysburg, right? The history thing, the historical event. You could, and to a uh to a degree, you have to in some way, you know, depending on on education standards and where you where you live and work.

You might have to say, hey, student, you do it, you do have to write this essay, because it's required that it be in a nasty form. However, your first run at it should be whatever that student's creative impulse is. If they're a dancer, explain to me the battle your interpretation of the Battle of Gettysburg as an interpretive dance. If you are a writer, write an essay. If you are an artist, draw an image.

If you are a video creator, if you're a TikTok creator, make a TikTok reel about it. But explain in a format that you, that you know the student themselves really enjoys creating in, being creative in. Explain it in terms of a domain that the student understands well. Hey, your student is a football uh scholar. Explain the battle of Gettysburg in terms of football plays.

Make them think on their feet. Make them think creatively. Because half of critical thinking is creative thinking. To be able to know from a metacognition perspective, how do I transfer this concept over here into this concept into this domain over here? Meta thinking, meta metacritical thinking, metacognition is all about how do we get people to use their brains and to reflect on their thinking processes.

And forcing everybody to write a five-paragraph essay when that is not your strength is a difficult way to do that. If you gave students, let's say you have a football star, and that writing's not their strength. You say, hey, here's what I want you to do. Explain the Battle of Gettysburg to me in football plays. Right?

They gotta study it, they gotta research it. They gotta go, well, you know, uh this troop movement over here looks like this kind of play, and this troop over here looks like this kind of play. And with their permission, their active informed consent, you record it, and then you and then you you use your machine to transcribe, just transcribe their words. You can say, look, you wrote the essay, right? You didn't probably you probably in the words that you spoke to explain this thing, you probably wrote ten times the essay.

Now you don't have to write it from scratch. Now you gotta do is clean up your words, you know, make make sure the grammar is proper, there's nothing you know, you kill off some of the run-on sentences, condense it down to the required format, but show them that the way that their brain works and the language they speak and the reference models they have in their heads works to create essays, but they go through it through a different modality from the modality that they understand. You have a student who's a musician, right? Explain this battle in terms of the movements in an orchestral piece or a rock song, or how uh Billy Idol would have written it in the 1970s, or whatever. Explain this.

How would you, if you have a student who's who's a skilled gamer, explain how you would uh portray this battle in Call of Duty. Right? Um, there's so many ways for a human being to express themselves, and if we confine them to one format that they that they do not like, they will by their very nature find ways to circumvent that to do as little work as possible because nobody likes doing things that they don't enjoy. Everybody likes to do things that they enjoy. So, how do you make the at least the first round of expression something that the student enjoys so that when they then go to effectively edit, right, and put the the content in the format that the curriculum or the standardized testing requires, it's a low lift for them.

They're like, Yeah, okay, I can write an essay based on how I thought about this, but I really like my version as a hip hop dance, right? That's the version that I would present to somebody. It requires a lot more creative thinking on the part of the educator. It requires a lot more critical thinking on the part of the educator and creative thinking on the part of the educator to have students to meet students where they are in terms of what and how they want to learn. But if you do it, you will get phenomenally better results.

You will get people using AI reluctantly or not at all, because it's not as fun as expressing themselves in the formats that they like. Now, are you going to get some students who are just lazy? Yes, that's human nature. And for that, your best bet are things that are collaborative in the classroom, group discussions, individual discussions, presentations. One of the things that Katie and I talk about on the Trust Incise podcast that is the benchmark for whether or not AI was used in any work is to say to somebody, hey, without opening the document you created, what does it say?

Someone who has used AI to think for them cannot answer that question. Doesn't matter how good they are at bullshitting, they cannot answer that question because they have the foggest idea what AI created. Someone who at least did the thinking and the ideation can say, Well, you know, Claude may have put the words on the paper or chat GPT put the words on the paper, but I told it I want an essay about this. Something that I've seen be very successful in higher education is teachers saying, Show me the prompts, show me your workflow for how you got to this result, so that I can see the thinking that went into it. That also is highly effective.

Because at that point, you're not you're not saying don't use AI, you're saying, show me how you use this tool to assist you in to augment your thinking and not replace it. Or you see, yeah, you did kind of replace your own thinking. How would you do it differently now? Or how would you do this without the assistance of AI? Those are all perfectly valid ways to tackle this problem.

But you're not going to stop people from using a technology to do work that they don't want to do. Right? In the same way that you're not going to stop people from taking shortcuts. That's human nature. That's that's not even human nature, that's animal nature.

All animals in nature strive to expend as little energy as possible so that at a fundamental level, they're not burning energy trying to fruitlessly survive. Why do you think like dogs and cats sleep 20 hours a day? It's not because they're lazy, it's because that is their nature to conserve energy so that when they so that when they hunt, they have enough energy to hunt and they can consume enough calories. That base nature as animals transfers over into things like intellectual work. A lot of academics do not want to admit that we are still fundamentally animals and that those tendencies we have remain true no matter what.

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